The wood detailing on the side could use a little more depth, and the metal portion of the cannon in front could use a few dents around the edges. Looks too perfect. Rocks are the perfect depth and level of detail.
Looks very nice and stylized, however, the rocks on the back of the cannon look a little bit blurry. Also, the robe may be a bit thick compared to your reference.
I love the rock sculpt, that part is really coming together. The wood detail on the side panels is rather faint and might be hard to read from a distance.
Beautiful Work! I feel like your sculpt captures the feel of the concept art! Amazing job the only thing I might add is a little bit of variation within the rope, just so it doesn't look 100% perfect - adding a bit of unevenness will take it to the next level!
Nice work with the rope. Logical cohesion of parts - the way they fit together - is nice. The base of the cannon, the mesh that curves over the wheels seems low poly. The wheels also seem a little faceted.
Hi Sunny! I LOVE the design you picked! Your details look super clean and it matches the style of the reference very well. My only recommendation would be to sharpen the edges of the rocks on the cannon even more to match the rocks on the base.
I love this piece a lot and the details on the stones. My only thing is the rope is somewhat anti gravity. In the original concept the rope clearly dips down but yours goes a little bit to the right so it looks floating a tad, I'm not really getting the weight of that rope.
I really liked the stone sculpt below the cannon but I think the stones on the cannon can get more attention to get that to same level of detailing. Overall, really nice work.
Your sculpt looks very clean. I love the way you incorporated all of the rocks and made everything stand out. I think the rocks in the barrel appear a bit soft and blurred. Very nice work overall!
Hello Sunny, I love all the little detail in your cannon, I personally love the amount of detail you put into the rock work for the cannon, and the rope looks really well made! One thing that I would recommend is to to try to strengthen the wood grain and try to separate the rocks from the cannon with deeper line work
I like how you made the cannon as same as the concept art and also made it look stylized. The rocks on top of the cannon looks a bit blurry if you could sharpen the details it would look more harmonized with the rocks on the bottom.
Looks really good compared to the reference but I would suggest adding a little more wood detail on the curved part so that it looks similar to the wood details that you added on the back part.
Looking really nice I'm having a hard time finding anything to critique! Perhaps you could use some tertiary detailing like surface noise or some tinier details throughout.
Your work is clean and is stylized. It looks close to your reference. Would want to maybe define the rocks, especially on the lower half of the cannon barrel.
The wood detailing on the side could use a little more depth, and the metal portion of the cannon in front could use a few dents around the edges. Looks too perfect. Rocks are the perfect depth and level of detail.
ReplyDeleteLooks very nice and stylized, however, the rocks on the back of the cannon look a little bit blurry. Also, the robe may be a bit thick compared to your reference.
ReplyDeleteI love the rock sculpt, that part is really coming together. The wood detail on the side panels is rather faint and might be hard to read from a distance.
ReplyDeleteBeautiful Work! I feel like your sculpt captures the feel of the concept art! Amazing job the only thing I might add is a little bit of variation within the rope, just so it doesn't look 100% perfect - adding a bit of unevenness will take it to the next level!
ReplyDeleteI think your work is very clean and stylized, my critique is to maybe make the wood grain deeper and the rock edges harsher.
ReplyDeleteNice work with the rope. Logical cohesion of parts - the way they fit together - is nice. The base of the cannon, the mesh that curves over the wheels seems low poly. The wheels also seem a little faceted.
ReplyDeleteHi Sunny! I LOVE the design you picked! Your details look super clean and it matches the style of the reference very well. My only recommendation would be to sharpen the edges of the rocks on the cannon even more to match the rocks on the base.
ReplyDeleteI love this piece a lot and the details on the stones. My only thing is the rope is somewhat anti gravity. In the original concept the rope clearly dips down but yours goes a little bit to the right so it looks floating a tad, I'm not really getting the weight of that rope.
ReplyDeleteI really liked the stone sculpt below the cannon but I think the stones on the cannon can get more attention to get that to same level of detailing. Overall, really nice work.
ReplyDeleteYour sculpt looks very clean. I love the way you incorporated all of the rocks and made everything stand out. I think the rocks in the barrel appear a bit soft and blurred. Very nice work overall!
ReplyDeleteHello Sunny, I love all the little detail in your cannon, I personally love the amount of detail you put into the rock work for the cannon, and the rope looks really well made! One thing that I would recommend is to to try to strengthen the wood grain and try to separate the rocks from the cannon with deeper line work
ReplyDeleteI like how you made the cannon as same as the concept art and also made it look stylized. The rocks on top of the cannon looks a bit blurry if you could sharpen the details it would look more harmonized with the rocks on the bottom.
ReplyDeleteLooks really good compared to the reference but I would suggest adding a little more wood detail on the curved part so that it looks similar to the wood details that you added on the back part.
ReplyDeleteLooking really nice I'm having a hard time finding anything to critique! Perhaps you could use some tertiary detailing like surface noise or some tinier details throughout.
ReplyDeleteYour work is clean and is stylized. It looks close to your reference. Would want to maybe define the rocks, especially on the lower half of the cannon barrel.
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